by Rene Foran
every timeyou openyour mouthan angel fallsinto a vat of whisky
shut ityou're fucking up heaven
2013 - Rene
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Gritty. Like this.*
those first fives lines are just excellent. they're the poem, for me.
Ha! (oops, sploosh) I love this.
Thanks, Bill, for reminding me that I still live here. :)
Great image. Sharp closing. I like this piece, Rene. Good writing. A pleasure to read more of your work here.
Thank you, Sam. I have been having a lot of fun writing micropoetry.
Thank you everyone for your feedback. And for reading my stuff :)
Pointed. Like a knitting needle sharpened on an oilstone.
Well said. *