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Gritty. Like this.*

those first fives lines are just excellent. they're the poem, for me.

Nicely done.

Welcome back!
Great poem.
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Ha! (oops, sploosh) I love this.

Thanks, Bill, for reminding me that I still live here. :)

Great image. Sharp closing. I like this piece, Rene. Good writing. A pleasure to read more of your work here.

Thank you, Sam. I have been having a lot of fun writing micropoetry.

Thank you everyone for your feedback. And for reading my stuff :)

Pointed. Like a knitting needle sharpened on an oilstone.

Well said. *