Honey Gold
by Rene Foran
honey gold
warming my cheek
your light is gonna
last me
through the week
golden delicious
sweet autumn kisses
taste so nice
mixin' the sugar
with the spice
sunshine
workin' those rays
you keep me smilin'
when the sky
turns grey
and when the night falls
you'll hear your name called
see you soon
i'll brag about you
to the moon
Rene ~ 2010
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sun kissed
autumn bliss
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Very nice poem, love the voice here, its sweet and swingy and definitely ROMANTIC
Thank you, Susan. I was going for all of that. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Rene
as susan said, it is sweet and swingy, could hear this set to music.
aww, thanks Cherise. I need to get around to reading your stuff.And everyone's stuff. I am dreadfully behind... I have been offline for eons!
Rene
I like the form her, Rene. Works well. Great attention to image and sound. Good.
thanks Sam...just a little something fun and light as a feather. sing songy and cute, too :)
Rene