by Niya C. Sisk
That rusty ol' table held the clothespins I used to hang my fiancés jeans. A rickety old clothesline that hung too low to keep the clothes out of the reach of raccoons and dirt.
We lived in a white and mint green trailer in the woods. I was 23. The hanging of the clothes on the line made me feel kind of famous in the eyes of nature — he laid nature's promise as something below his beloved Nietzsche yet above himself. His suspicion of himself — the thing that attracted me to him in the first place, turned to absolutism on any given Sunday.
The table survived five seasons of rain, wind and forest excretions. The creaking of the base still brings back the feeling of waiting.
Too young to spin into what his 37 year world wanted of me. And too old to go back to the providence of childhood rebellion. I hung on the line envying the clarity of rust — real time going by that made real marks. What more could a philosophical girl living in a two toned box in the woods do but wait for the verdict.
To grow up or down?
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Young love. Will it work out? This is the existential question that hangs out rust ready.
Beautiful story and meditation. *
"The hanging of the clothes on the line made me feel kind of famous in the eyes of nature — he laid nature's promise as something below his beloved Nietzsche yet above himself."
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"What more could a philosophical girl living in a two toned box in the woods do but wait for the verdict."
Ann's description of the piece as mediation hits the mark for me. Enjoyed.
I like the idea that this piece is meditative. It's a nice surprise. Thank you for reading and giving feedback! Love that.
fine writing, nina. fav.
Nice balance on the tightrope between physical and philosophical. *
Thank you James... Mucho appreciated. And love your comment Beate. I was hoping there would be a sense of grounding to the story. ; )