for Nick and JT
Rarely is Quay Street so clean,
Monday in rain,
Neactain's ticking over with
Slow jazz and crosswords,
Stout and steaming anoraks.
Here is our summer, our July,
Without which there would
Be no casual banter, no
Sympathetic glances exchanged
At the door,
No umbrellas shared and shaken,
No conversations from nothing
With a stranger shielding a
Cigarette from the Atlantic,
No mist to wrap a beauty
Safe in the shawl of morning
As we sit and watch the
Sky from a Spanish window
Waiting for the cracks.
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Originally published by Revival Journal (Limerick) - this is an old poem for two wonderfully bad influences on me. Cheers!
Another well crafted poem.*
Thank you Amanda!
Brings to mind those sketches by graphic artists that provide sharp visuals, depth and embracing ambiance in a few quick strokes. Masterful. *
Wow - thanks a million Mathew. I might put that one on the back of my next book! cheers to you!
Good poem. Especially connect with the third stanza.
Nice rhythm and detail.
Lyrical grace.
Yep.*
Thanks for all the comments here lads and lassies.
Its beauty is its observations -- the whole eye of the poem. Wonderful.