The wind has no voice
and yet we listen,
perhaps imagining the ramblings
of a mad man;
the only one to take an outside
table and tea, biro-sketching
the trees and
the letting go of leaves.
Autumn is in a canter,
head held high — it being
the greatest alchemist —
zig zagging the 7th & 8th Districts,
brushing both the dead and
the dying with a whisper:
Winter may well be your judge
but do not leave quietly.
Through windows we time
the moon rising, from nothing
to a quarter crescent,
from pitch to pallor;
a bite taken from the Host:
a criticism of the dead to forfeit,
for what is memory
if not a ghost?
- for Irene Szankowsky
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First published in The SHOp Magazine, Ireland, I thought this might be appropriate for the time of year, and although it's been a few years since I wrote it sipping on a Grosser Brauner outside Cafe Hummel in Vienna, the ghosts always come back and say hello.
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Enjoyed this a lot, with its resonant lines and appealing developement.
Thank you for reading David and Amanda.
A lovely thing, indeed.
I like the movement in this piece, Neil - from no voice to the letting go of leaves to alchemy to whisper to windows to ghosts. Good poem.
Enjoyed. Excellent for the season.*
Lovely and yet strong in imagery that blends with the softness.
Neil, this is my first poem of yours I've read...it's lyrical, and lovely, haunting and elegiac. Leaves me with such lasting impressions. Fave.
thank you Robert, Susan and Gary. It's always great to get feedback & comments.
Oh yes and wow. Lots of wow.
Thank you Mr C!