So Few Dreams
by Mark Reep
So few dreams are the doors they seem. The window brightens, the looking-glass clouds; when you look again, that path is gone, wisdom withered, ashes at your feet. I know baby, it's hard, it's hard. But you're no virgin, you know that crow— Don't give him the satisfaction of watching you grasp after shards of never-was. Bird the bastard if you want, but whatever you do, don't let him see you cry.
Ain't it the truth...
Nice work.
Polonius lives. Wonderful lyricism here from the first line on; like it could be set to music. "...grasp after shards of never-was" is heart wrenching. *
Really nice. A muscular kind of lyricism that works very well. Congrats on the pub.
you know crow, and bird the bastard..love your bird usage, so strong this one.
A lot of emotion in this. Almost spooky to read. *