I used to compare her to a sunburn
the first of the summer
it is always the worst one
exposed skin
almost hot to the touch
turning warm and pink
then raw and red
it is a transition that is effortless
but still you can feel it happening
a lot like love
you can feel it all around you
but you are never aware until it is too late how deep you are already in
a kind of burn that feels good
but you know its going to hurt afterwards
I used to compare her to cigarettes
an addiction you cannot quit
a need for the nicotine to invade your lungs
the smoke to dance like a whisper out of your lips
a false fix
to ease the tension
an inhale of white transparency
of poison
of burn
an enslavement
only getting worse with each brush
getting deeper
swayed by the pure goodness of the evil
the burn
your skin turned tender
only when pressed upon can you see the true color that was
the true essence of what used to be before the scorch
before stupidity and vulnerability got the best of you
before giving in to blessedness
before the burn
want
wonder
writhing
fantasy
and then
confusion
question
need
anticipating
without it you're dull
you're clean
you're comfortable
but you will always miss the burn
the ache
you want to feel like you're fighting
like you're not going down easy
rebelling
you will miss the warmth
the scratchy, raw, roughness
the interruption
the burn that you can feel all around you
scarring your delicate skin
into the depths of your lungs
ruining you every single breath
the burn
the burn
she was the burn
and now
she is the sun
5/7/14
A couple of damn good comparisons!
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Love the way this tilts up at the end. Gave me a little burst of sun!
Was brought here after reading DP's Editor's Eye. Killer last line!