by Lore Prior
I dream of you, Tara, ex-goth princess gone art school,
updating your thick black eyeliner with sparkles and baby blue shadow.
Your maddening oh-so-skinny jeans make me so hungry
I need to peel them off your narrow hips like potato skin.
Stare at me, Tara, through your sheet of blonde blonde hair
with roots so dark you're lying if you say you've never dyed it.
While you read your angsty poetry I don't care that it's terrible,
'cause while you recite I'm picturing you grinding up against me,
breathy sex catching a piece of gold hair in the corner of your mouth.
I dream of you, Ashton,
bourgeoise anorexic virgin, your eyes like a Greek tragedy.
I want to kiss your jutting bones and convince you you're beautiful through orgasm,
three fingers deep while Kid A choreographs your squirming with swells overhead.
“You're safe with me,” I whisper, and I'm swallowed by you.
You're my intellectual cocaine queen,
and as you sit in your gypsy room spouting politics
I can't help but think I'd sound more informed
if I was tracing 'round your nipple with the tip of my tongue.
I dream of you too, Jessalyn,
pristine daughter of the love generation,
as I stare at the wall tripping on mushrooms.
You dance in front of me, noodle-slim body wriggling fantastic
to the groove of psychedelic rock.
I wish I could taste the peach in your cheeks,
grab at your miniature ass for no reason other than it's mine.
You curve in all the right places, and I want to clutch all those places
to find your soul inside your G spot.
I beg you, fuck me please.
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I got frustrated at college being surrounded by straight "bi-curious" girls who would only stick their tongue in my mouth if males were present to watch; I wrote about it.
yikes
i didn't know whether to read this one or fuck it
pls send to the sex (sometimes in the first line) group, since we do not currently havre a "sex in every line" category.
i am the administrator of said group. though, clearly, there is no administrator for this.
cheers,
gp
What I truly appreciate about this is that it has the whiff and feel of the real thing. It's heated to going almost off the grid and it works. The passion and the thought of passion come alive in a very real and human wanting way.
Really like the phrasings throughout the piece, lauren. Strong voice. Good form for it.
Really nicely done and some wonderfully descriptive lines.
"I wish I could taste the peach in your cheeks," was my favorite.
Wow...powerful stuff. I like very much.
OMG. Splat. Yeah.
You make we want to say very naughty things....good piece...."my intellectual cocaine queen" and "bourgeoisie anorexic virgin" very creative use descriptions.
you guys are wonderful! thank you for accepting my creative horniness.
My favorite line: "I wish I could taste the peach in your cheeks"
I like "bourgeoise anorexic virgin, your eyes like a Greek tragedy" - kudos for the title too
You curve in all the right places, and I want to clutch all those places to find your soul inside your G spot.
Fuck yes. Most def a fave.