The air eagerly grasps my face as the sound of my heart accelerates inside my ears. I struggle to breathe in the over-whelming rush while my body feels like it is free-falling along the twists and turns of the oncoming track. A gasp somehow escapes my pressed lips as my body is lifted over a portion of land that contains sharp edges and corners. Calmness prevails for the next few minutes until a downward spiral engulfs my body. The constant barraging visual cues make me wonder if I will make it to the end.
I force my eyes to close, and know another breath cannot be taken unless a scream erupts. My stomach feels like a feather fluttering in the continual illusion of danger. It is no longer the mind bending exhilaration of riding the edge. Now it is a groundless, weightless fall, compiled with an automatic inborn fear of crashing.
After the rise and fall of a deadly curve I now look to the ground instead of what it is ahead. Strong emotional feelings have now been triggered and I wonder if I am the only one free-falling among the towering evergreens. The hills and valleys of the track begin to subside and suddenly I wonder if life is measured by the breaths we take, or by the moments that take our breath away.
I wrote this piece after I told the originator of the youtube video "Mieders Alpine Coaster" by David Ellis how I felt watching it. I admitted I was a voyeur not a participant, but that his video fascinated me to the point that I needed to write about it.
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After the rise and fall of a deadly curve I now look to the ground instead of what it is ahead.
"My stomach feels like a feather fluttering in the continual illusion of danger. It is no longer the mind bending exhilaration of riding the edge. Now it is a groundless, weightless fall, compiled with an automatic inborn fear of crashing."
Strong details in this piece. Nice writing.
Great last line. Does such a thing really exist, not that I'd want to try it? *
I also like the last line here.*
Thanks Sam once again for taking the time to read.. I so appreciate it.
I wish I knew Jake.
Thanks Beate!
You've said so vividly here what I felt when I watched that video, Linda.
"The constant barraging visual cues make me wonder if I will make it to the end." Yeah, me, too! *
Ya never know Matt..:)