Foster's Landing
by Kitty Boots
two black lines
divided by a white, broken stripe
last spring's patches bubbling up in the heat
punching radio stations
no CD's because I enjoy the satisfaction
of the randomness
my stomach is empty, but
it is my eyes that are hungry
scanning for sustenance
every bottle of water I drink oozes through my pores
the paint ponies won't even come to the fence
all their energy is used up fighting flies
goats are huddled in a shady corner
a Great Blue Heron probes the ditch
the road still bearing marks of the last flood tide
I take a wrong turn and apologize to the people in the yard
permission to turn around on their property
don't be silly, Mrs. Foster says
come sit with us, take your pictures
she offers me a glass of tea
and we realize we know each other
under the big shade tree I sit in an old lawn chair
crinkly webbing digging into the backs of my legs
we talk
I look, eat with my eyes
crab pots, old docks, part fishing camp, part trailer park
old Airstreams, kayaks, wind surfers
Delbert's just boiled up a mess of crabs, she says
won't you stay?
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"the paint ponies won't even come to the fence
all their energy is used up fighting flies"
Nice!
I'm smiling ear to ear.
"punching radio stations
no CD's because I enjoy the satisfaction
of the randomness"
Yes to that! Must be a generational thing. :)
I love the atmosphere in this piece, it's so familiar and comforting. ***
Thank you, Bill, Matt and Jerry.
Thank you, Charlotte. It's a neat place and I've no doubt Mrs. Foster would welcome you, as well! :)
Love this.
You really put the reader in the moment. Not only put us there, but make us long to be there. Can't help but smile when reading. Great work.
Thank you, Gary.
Thank you, Joey.
Yeah, what Charlotte said about the atmosphere.
Brings it all into focus.*
Thank you, Tim.
"every bottle of water I drink oozes through my pores
the paint ponies won't even come to the fence
all their energy is used up fighting flies"
This stuff comes alive for me.
Thank you, Darryl.