clouded

The weary need to be more wary.*

A heavy overcast predicted in the coming years.

Nice, and I love the way it looks on the page.

Whilst trying to come up with something clever to express my awe at this clever segue of omen to dread, I glanced at Tim's comment, and lost my train of thought.

dishwasher sky. ***

Mathew, lol. Check the train schedule, it's due to return.

Thank you, Tim, Gary, Steve, Matt and Rachna.

ozone hiding the faces of obscure men

Thank you, Samuel.

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Love the clever image of "a dishwater sky"!

Thank you, Sam and Ed.

I still like this but thought I'd try an edit, it helps me with my own stuff.

clouds white,
edged with gray,
dishwater sky,
sun-shot columns
break, release

a smell of snow,
ozone hiding faces,
obscure men waving
pennants of promise,
under weary noses.

Samuel, thank you for your edit. I always welcome the feedback.