by Kathy Fish
Every morning she changes out of her wet nightgown and goes into the bathroom and shakes her mother's Cashmere Bouquet talcum powder all over her body and into a fresh pair of underpants before she dresses for school. For about an hour she smells like perfume. Once, she saw her dad put Ban roll-on on his armpits and then swipe a big “X” of it across his chest. She tried this, but the kids at school said Ban roll-on smells worse than piss.
She asks her mother if she can take a bath in the mornings. “But how will you ever learn if you don't suffer the consequences?" her mother says, pointing to her chin. "You have cereal there."
“So be it,” Emmeline says.
Dick Fencl draws pictures of army planes and war scenes during class. At recess, he stands inside the monkey bars and sings “The Ballad of the Green Berets.” He and Emmeline are both on the chunky side. They don't climb the monkey bars and everybody leaves them alone there. Emmeline wishes Dick Fencl would sing something a little more up-tempo.
They're getting their history papers back today. They were supposed to write a biography about a person from Civil War times. She was going to write about Abraham Lincoln but then found a book about his wife, Mary Todd Lincoln.
Mary Todd Lincoln reminds her of her Aunt Janine, who takes off every few months and drives to Florida and Emmeline's mom and grandma have to track her down and commit her. When she's not being committed, though, she's okay. She paints Emmeline's toenails and gives her sips of the cocktails she learned to make tending bar at Vic's Tavern. In her paper, Emmeline compares Mary Todd Lincoln's crazy, which involved spending lots of money and going to séances, with her Aunt Janine's, which involves wearing cowgirl outfits and running with strange men.
So all the kids get their papers back except Emmeline. Sister Valeria calls her up.
“This,” she says, flapping the paper on her desk, “is filth and nonsense.” She's glaring at her. Behind her, Pope Paul and President Nixon are glaring at her too.
Emmeline wants to say, “So be it,” but she can't open her mouth. She's sweating in her wool jumper (with the embroidered heart for the Sacred Heart of Jesus) and that stink melds with her usual pissy smell. Sister Valeria wrinkles up her nose and tears up the paper on Mary Todd Lincoln and orders her to write another one, twice as long. Emmeline is ordered to kneel in the back of the room and say a rosary. Out loud.
The floor hurts her knees. The kids are turning around in their seats to look at her. Dick Fencl is smiling goofily, giving her the thumbs up.
If she closes her eyes and breathes deep enough, she finds she doesn't smell so bad.
blessedisthefruitofthywooomJesus The words make her feel like she's all alone in a shiny new place. She wonders if Dick Fencl feels like this when he's singing about the Green Berets. nowandatthehourofourdeathamen
Mary Todd Lincoln was holding her husband's hand when he was shot in the back of the head at Ford's Theater. After the funeral, she holed up in the White House for six weeks, and then one day she put on a fancy black dress and went to Chicago. Like that.
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Originally published in Smokelong Quarterly and reprinted in my forthcoming collection TOGETHER WE CAN BURY IT (The Lit Pub).
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What a surprising work to read - Not at all what I was expecting. "They're getting their history papers back today. They were supposed to write a biography about a person from Civil War times. She was going to write about Abraham Lincoln but then found a book about his wife, Mary Todd Lincoln." and "blessedisthefruitofthywooomJesus The words make her feel like she's all alone in a shiny new place. She wonders if Dick Fencl feels like this when he's singing about the Green Berets. nowandatthehourofourdeathamen" Wonderful piece of writing, Kathy.
Thank you, kind Sam. I'm glad the story surprised you. What were you expecting if I may ask?
And surprise - not in a bad way, Kathy. I'll use "Foreign Film" as an example, which I cosider very much in line with your style of writing. Reading that piece is like being inside a scene of a Bergman film ... the reader is inside the story, in the setting - reading "Florida" is like standing outside the window in the prose poem "Windows" - from Paris Spleen - by Baudelaire: "Looking from outside into an open window one never sees as much as when one looks through a closed window." I'm eavesdropping, and I find that fascinating. I think I react to your story this way because of the historical & religion overtones. "Florida" moves me in a completely different way from many of your other works. Big like though - one of my favorites of yours.
That should be religious overtones -
Simply wonderful. What more can I say~
Thanks so much, Susan!
Perfect story. Perect title. Perfect integretion of personal (the characters' I mean of course) and public histories, insanities, forgivenesses. Emmeline's mother and Nixon have a lot in common here, a lot to anwer for. But. "The words make her feel like she's all alone in a shiny new place. She wonders if Dick Fencl feels like this when he's singing about the Green Berets." This is transcendent empathy and this quote alone makes a wonderful argument for fiction. Thank you, author.
wow, thank you James Robison...
Good writing, interesting characters and story. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Thanks for reading it, J.!
Wow. Even without the sense of familiarity (I'm a parochial school kid) with the classroom, the scent of a student (Helen D), the nuns and the kneeling, I felt the hurt of this. This is a great piece of work.
Emmaline is a gem of a character. Nice story.
Thanks so much, Susan and Kim!
Kathy, I echo what James says. The integration of the characters’ lives with historical details is just done perfectly. What you give us in this story is just rich in many ways.
I really appreciate the kind words, Christian. Thank you!
Very Nice. Perfect title as well. Wonderful, hard visual details throughout. And the names of the characters themselves are great. Dick Fencl?!
That first paragraph made me laugh out loud!She tried this, but the kids at school said Ban roll-on smells worse than piss.
A great mix of characters on a wild ride. Good stuff. Loads of fun.
Thanks, Jack Swenson. That's quite the profile pic. ;-)
Great ending, Kath!! Lovely- as always! You know I'm a sucker for family pieces and there's so much here- the relationship between the mother and daughter and also thoughts about the aunt.
aw, Tiffer, I'm a sucker for family stories too (obviously). Thanks for reading and faving "'Watermelon" and "Florida." I appreciate it.
Oh, I really like the way you integrate expository writing and creative characters/happenings/mood. I love the connection betw. Mary Todd Lincoln and Aunt Janine.
This is marvelous. It made me hurt. My knees, my heart. I want to sit in the back of that classroom and give Emmaline a big Thumbs-Up when she gets up the nerve to say "So be it" to that nun one day.
She is a terrific character. Is there more of her somewhere?
Thanks so much for the close read of this story, Michele. I think I have other versions of "Daffodil" in other stories, but I do think I'd like to write more about her, yes. Thanks again!
Oh, I love Emmeline. She’s just great. I love that she says “So be it” and wishes for something more up-tempo. I love that she wears Ban roll-on and likens her Aunt Janine to Mary Todd Lincoln. Great character, Kathy.
Kari, thanks so much for reading this one. I love Emmaline too. :)
This is brilliant, truthful and painful. Poor Emmeline. But she is a trooper. Loved how she wanted Dick to sing something more up tempo. I liked this very much.
Thanks very much, Krista!
I'd LOVE to read that kid's paper! Great story.
Hey, it's Kate! Hi and thanks!
you continue to astonish, kath--
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thanks, Gary!
Two words, Kathy ... "Wow." Yes, I know that's only one word, but I said it twice.
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Bless you, James. I thought this one was done getting reads. I appreciate both wows, very much.
"In her paper, Emmeline compares Mary Todd Lincoln's crazy, which involved spending lots of money and going to séances, with her Aunt Janine's, which involves wearing cowgirl outfits and running with strange men."
Abe in this story seems like the rare husband who takes any heat in the family for that.
Compressed, lots o'story.
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Thanks, Ann. And thanks for starting the M Illness group. Not feeling well today, but hope to get in here and read some of the postings soon.
I love the part of men's roll-on deoderant. I agree, its smells like the worst cheapest cologne.
Thanks for reading, Gloria.
So much to like! Not least the way it maps how the mind--any mind--moves from analogy to analogy....and just enough funny to make it real and make it art.
Thanks for the lovely comment, Sally!