Winyah Bay
by John Riley
Effie reckons the river her sister keeps asking about, the Great Pee Dee, was named after some Indians. She knows it runs north of Florence, close-by the farm their daddy worked. There's a college in Florence named after Francis Marion, the Swamp Fox, who sure taught the British a thing or two, that hadn't been there when they were girls. She doesn't know what sort of lessons they teach at the college, but it's probably as big a waste of space as her sister is, spending day and night slumped in her wheelchair, slobber bib yellow and crusty, asking over and over what happened to the Great Pee Dee, never just the Pee Dee, mind you, always the Great Pee Dee, instead of sitting there quiet like a good girl and watching The Price is Right. Hope to die, when people start losing their minds they get stuck on the craziest notions. Worrying about a river, and here it is 1976, when everyone knows rivers don't mean a thing no more, what with the big trucks roaring up and down the superhighways and airplanes flying stuff all around the world day and night. It ain't like when they were girls and rivers did people some good and they'd sneak away from their chores to watch rafts of pine logs drift south on the slow current and wonder what it'd be like to float all the way to Winyah Bay.
Great voice, John. Lots going on just beneath the surface.*
Great compression and storytelling, John.
Great piece, John. Makes me ache like the best ones do. *
Thanks, guys for the nice words. This one is pretty centered in a specific place and culture and I didn't know if it'd travel well.
Fave, John. I agree with Barry. Great piece, so well-written. I know the place whereof you write, but, more importantly, you have asked the universal question: "Ubi sunt...?
Thanks for the wonderful comment, James. I always hope that is where I succeed.
great stuff. love the perspective.
David, I called you James. I've wanted to do this several times and don't know why. I apologize, but they are both fine, sturdy names, easily used inter-changeably.
Love the voice of the narrator that makes the whole situation so vivid and moving. Fave*
Every bit of this is good but this'n is best: "Hope to die, when people start losing their minds they get stuck on the craziest notions." That's the truth, Ruth. I wonder what my own broken record will sound like. *
I remember. Good work.
This is so deceptively easy, like falling into an unmade bed--which you discover to be flowing on a river's current.*
I like this very much. *
Thanks, everyone for the nice comments. I've fallen behind on my thank yous.
Great writing, John. A strong punch *