by John Riley
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This is one of my oldest poems. The first draft was written decades ago. This version was published a few years back but don't remember where. Maybe The Meadowland Review. It no longer googles.
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A lovely constraint.
I LOVE the last stanza, great closing. **
Like a lucid dream. And that last stanza, yes. *
Lovely image.*
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*, John. More of your fine work.
Thanks guys
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the cardboard lady folds her cold smile into the new flame. Yes.
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Thanks, Meg and Paul and Rene.
Missed this first time around. Glad I found it!
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