by Jerry Ratch
I see young girls in their white summer dresses and remember how I was like that, light youth that barely touched the ground. Screwing and unscrewing the lid of a salt shaker (sitting at a table.) Swinging a shoe off the tip of my toes. Rubbing a foot up and down the leg of the table.
And I watch a young couple across the street. They are on a search in new cheap clothing to find the gaiety of life. They go from store to store. They are really living. I know that this is what they will remember of each other. This, and their floating nights, near the ceiling of their youth.
And I remember reading a book (in a dream) entitled, “The Origin of Perfume.” And I was in it, and it smelled exactly like you.
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Nice!
Wonderful images, and to appeal to the sense of smell is one of the most difficult yet you've done it so well.
Really nice, Jerry. I can hear the salt shaker, see the young couple, and smell the perfume. *
Thank you, Matt, Susan, Kim!
I love this. *
Wonderful piece, this is. Well done, Jerry.
Stunning. A masterpiece. *
Thank you all! Much appreciated!
Nice, Jerry! Full of vivid images. Nice ending paragraph.
Thanks, Christian!