by Jerry Ratch
I saw this woman on a date at Denny's
Friday night
With her 8-year-old son
No ring, vacant stare
Still pretty
But wolfing down a stack of pancakes,
Looking around the restaurant
Occasionally
At a party of kids from some church
When you're not young enough
To know everything anymore
There's a limit to details
At the end of the cloud
I've been a little like her myself
Because of what you did
You were all around us once
This is all I know
You could see our names from the inside
And the love in me was slow
And sweet, and thick
And came oozing from me
The whole time I was with you
That's the nature of honey
A milk white substance leaked from my parts
I opened my heart
And a warmth blew out I did not know
It's true I‘ve pulled my own heart apart
But I've gotten better
I've got this built-in funny-bone inside my heart
That keeps me laughing at myself now
And you can't touch that
Anymore
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"When you're not young enough
To know everything anymore." I liked how you used the image of the woman take us into the regions of the narrator's heart. Sad, yet hopeful.*
Thank you, Gary!
Appreciate it!
So close to home. Very well put.