by Jerry Ratch
You could have drawn us forth anytime on the beach, harping, begging to be let go from the grasp of your song. I needed you to sing of my neck, with its ropes teeming and filled. You only had to spread me open and loosen the shuddering country, anytime. (My image like a tow-headed statue!)
I know what they said. I heard the malice thrust about me. But you could rise like a sail, lord over and take me away, anytime. You should know that. Glitter might succeed in rousing a few, but not you. You were not empty, and you did not exult over the held-out heart. Though youth and its torch of promise may rage over the defeated earth, still, I would go there to be near you.
This much I know … in the desert that opens up, the young, and the hot, go riding. Riding.
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An intriguing piece with a dynamite finish. Great stuff. *
Thank you, Jack!
I needed you to sing of my neck, with its ropes teeming and filled.
Wonderful writing, here.
Thank you so much, Sara!
Nice work, Jerry. Enjoyed - especially the closing.
"This much I know … in the desert that opens up, the young, and the hot, go riding. Riding."
Yes.
Thanks, Sam. Appreciated!
wonderful! loved the POV, works well. found myself reciting this immediately without knowing what i did.
Wow! Thank you, Marcus!
Love to see the more abstract ones coupled with the straightforward narrative ones.
I'm watching you create and assemble the pieces of an elaborate and intricate memoir.
Thank you so much, Bill! Really appreciated!