Now We're Getting Somewhere
by Jerry Ratch
Woman bites into pearl,
finds baby oyster.
Woman bites baby oyster,
finds baby pearl.
Woman blows on baby pearl,
it begins to grow.
Woman gets excited.
Now we're getting somewhere!
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Woman has dental insurance. *
Nice repetition. I'd make the "Now we're getting somewhere" italics and end there. It's a nice line. No need for "she says."
Curiously refreshing.