by Jerry Ratch
The moon once rose on its own
Now it takes a series of
Ropes and pulleys to get it up
Because it's so old
And you can hear these audible groans
Coming from its craters
As it's forced to listen to forgotten lovers
Obsessing over old loves
While the dark bulb goes off
In the mind's eye
And question marks appear
Out of the dark like light poles
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New moon, old moon, full moon. I saw it last night!
Enjoyed. I always think there can't be any new way to write about the moon and I am always wrong about that.
Thanks, Dianne!
I would ditch the last line completely. Other than that, love it.
good thought! thanks!
okay, I did it! Thanks, Darryl.