by Jerry Ratch
It is a strange world, dawn.
You may find yourself alone
with your God, the old, and the
young. Very likely a bird.
An old one out hobbling past on a cane,
a small dog trotting from bush to bush,
sniffing a pile of leaves,
jumping back, startled at a leaf.
The new-born wailing from its crib
until a breast fills its mouth.
Other than that, there is only
you and God, alone with your
thoughts about each other
in the mystery of awareness
at the new beginning.
The long stretch of time
between you and your essence.
Nothing else but the chatter
of the squirrel in the branches,
the crow calling out its
previous names.
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Love the last line - the crow calling out its previous name - so haunting is that image. This was an enjoyable journey through the eyes of another as they look around them and consider the relationship between man, God, and nature. There was a stark loneliness like a spine through the entire work that offered a melancholy strength I found myself drawn to and somehow comforted by it, because it echoed some of my own inner thoughts.
Thank you so much, Paula!