A bit of anxiety is
Good for you,
They say.
As if it's not enough,
Coupled with the
Nightmares that
Won't go away -
No, not even with that pill,
It's useless,
And you've lost much will,
To ever dream again
It's good to have some,
Extra weight -
Something they can
Grab on to,
In the sheets,
When it's late-
Nothing will get rid of it,
Anyway -
No, not even that pill,
It's a piece of junk,
And you've lost much will,
To ever eat again
Always carry an extra
Blanket in your car-
In case it breaks down,
And you, also, break down-
At least you'll have something
To envelop you,
Not those pills again,
No, not even that pill,
Its brand name was
Discontinued anyway,
And you've lost much will,
To ever drive again
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I just wanted to write about anxiety, and it turned into a little poem.
And a good poem at that, getting much closer to the truth about it than the nostrum peddler aka psychologist I just say on tv.
"saw on tv."
I know about anxiety and its crippling power. You capture that well. I love the vulnerability too. It's impressive.
Well done. The connecting lines which close each stanza are effective. Good piece. *
Thank you :) Means a lot.
Good for you!!!!! Good for you.
(Better *SPENT* than *held*, I know how THAT goes ... )
;)
#cheers
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The opening line is everything!
nicely done.