Saturday's Heart
my heart--
Saturday crosswords
Front burning, percolating
Last night's dream
Saturday crosswords
day dreams, at last!
back burner,
alarm clocks
day dreams, at last!
Timetables colliding, time tables
alarm clocks
Sunday stew
Time tables, highlighted and
big book of Dreams,
Sunday Stew.
Reading Rack.
"Big Book of Dreams"
fluffed white robe
Reading Rack
thin, fine china
fluffed white robe
black sky window
fragile china
Fresh, first snow
Big, sky window
Evening TV
Fresh, first snow
Morning Weather: alert
Saturday's Crossword
Front burning; percolating
Last night's dream--
my heart.
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Nice! Love the form, the flow, the details, the repetitions. Feels like Saturday. Love the opening and closing "my heart."
Thank you so much Dianne!
I agree with Dianne, the form is appealing, the repeated phrases musical but varied so as to avoid sheer repetition. It seemed
a little like a sestina, but remade into an original form; very impressive
Thank you, David. I appreciate it!
Feels familiar. *