by Guy Yasko
I
It's been there all week,
Nose tucked into tail
Comfort found between impact and asphalt
II
I'm still here
logged out, still here
Had it with the billboards
the check engine light
milemarkers...
Just want to crawl under my desk
sleep
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Opening visuals grabbed me right away. I like this one. Bravo!
Many thanks for taking the time and effort to read & comment, sean.
Tight, killer opening image, nailed the last line. Fave.
Thanks, Michael. Much appreciated.
Pretty good stuff.
Thanks, Sheldon.
Great form, and so very relatable, Guy!
Fave.
As always, thank you Robert.
Brevity and economy of motion carry the weight in this power packed little piece. Vivid imagery that takes me right to those places. Really strong work Guy! *