Mezzanine
by Guy Yasko
I am i said pursued by the feeling of being watched.
You are she said -- by yourself. As in a dream, a dream you know you're dreaming. Which changes nothing.
We are she said watching from the mezzanine, half-above, at once a part and apart.
You are she said -- by yourself. As in a dream, a dream you know you're dreaming. Which changes nothing.
We are she said watching from the mezzanine, half-above, at once a part and apart.
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The points of view are jarring and revealing in their accuracy, which, of course, may seem surreal to the non-initiate. I like this story. *
"at once a part and apart." Nicely done. Fave.
Very fine.
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Thanks for the reads and the faves, everyone.
Oh! And this. This is a fine, fine thing. It is so slim, so trim -- and yet all that stuff in between is there. And I like the structure --
I am i said...
You are she said...
Big * here.