The Light After Equinox
Soon enough, October's ragged
lawn will hide its deficiencies
under withered leaves of oak,
pecan, and elm. A first freeze is
still a month away here and
any surprise of snow another
one or two past leaf fall.
Moderating winds push
away the summer's heat and
desiccation. The sun's light is
softer hued now. A faint russet
modulates the stark, hot
white to something kinder to the
wrinkled gray of head and hands.
lawn will hide its deficiencies
under withered leaves of oak,
pecan, and elm. A first freeze is
still a month away here and
any surprise of snow another
one or two past leaf fall.
Moderating winds push
away the summer's heat and
desiccation. The sun's light is
softer hued now. A faint russet
modulates the stark, hot
white to something kinder to the
wrinkled gray of head and hands.
Poweerful. *
Gentle yet strong in its visions of change. Well done.
Ready to rest the a/c. You've captured the autumn ambience. *
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Sharp and beautiful imagery.
Lovely. *
*, so well described by wonderful imagery, Gary.
The light, yes, it's the light.
Beautiful imagery.*
Love this "A faint russet
modulates the stark, hot
white to something kinder to the
wrinkled gray of head and hands."
Nice description of the season and its effect, the passing of years. "*"
Thanks to all for reading and comments.
Mighty stuff. Could be a photograph.
Thanks, Neil.
Love that last stanza.*
Thanks, Gary.