Haiku Haiku, Fattened Feral Kittens, Hobgoblin Test
by Gary Hardaway
Haiku Haiku
The hope is always
that the thrown stone sends ripples
all they way to shore.
Fattened Feral Kittens
for Blanche, Medea and Moose
The wild lives more in you three than the other cats.
Though most of your lives have been spent
in a dry house with air conditioned against the seasons
and you eat with regularity ample enough
to have given you generous guts,
when you smell the spring-- the time
we calculate your birth to have been—
wafting in through screened windows
and watch the bird play and squirrel play
and the twitching of cottontail noses
and press your paws against the back door glass
and stare transfixed, ears erect and alert,
we know your six first weeks
among the weeds, shrubs and tree bark
and your mother's damning eyes
pull at you like the moon on the oceans
and you want to scratch the eyes
out of the furred and feathered things
that chirp and strut their freedom
just beyond the glass, just out of reach.
Hobgoblin Test
If I should fail
to contradict myself,
please check my pulse.
I might be dead,
a room temperature mouthpiece
for history, revised.
All stunning.*
Yes to all, but especially for the feral children who now enrich our lives. The other three cats aren't positive we did the right thing by capturing and semi-taming them, however.*
I enjoyed these. Unusual salad fixings! I've watched the fattening of these wild things in pics, and really loved "your mother's damning eyes
pull at you like the moon on the oceans" Hobgoblin Test, though. I can relate very well to that one!
Whoa!
All good. Fattened Feral Kittens exceptionally so.
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Especially liked the fattened, feral kittens.*
Well, I must contradict my usual self here and vote for the Hobgoblin Test. I did love FFK, but then kittens do that to most everyone, don't they? Nor am I ignoring the ripples. I needed a salad today. *
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I can't pick. I love all three! Super duper. A+ / *
All good. Very good! *
I am grateful for the kind responses.
Nice set. Good variety on display. *