Valentine Day
Valentine Day
so exciting
it means he really loves her
what will he bring
she waits
he comes home with a hang dog
expression on his face
her valentine was left
at the gambling table
so exciting
it means he really loves her
what will he bring
she waits
he comes home with a hang dog
expression on his face
her valentine was left
at the gambling table
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Oh the poor woman, just who can you trust to be your Valentine? Good poem!
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Good form, Estelle. I like it.
Another vote against the day! :)
you are right on the mark Christoper.
thanks for reading it.
yes Susan, a very un-trustworthy day.
He really got cleaned out, huh? Poor guy. And he had such good intentions, too. Surely he would have bought her something nice with his winnings. *
I have bad memories about Valentine Day going back to grade school, with a few good ones in between. I enjoyed reading this.
glad you had some good ones Mykell, thanks for reading mine.
That dog. Did he sleep in the little house out back? * Q
sure did Quenby.
Ouch. That one hurts.But very good poem!
Nice thought Jack, but how do we know???
that is a big OUCH Daryl. Hope it hasn't hurt too many guys.