Surprise
by Estelle Bruno
she was 12 years old
sat at her desk, a bashful girl, who
wished she could have gotten sick
this day, not to be here, to face being
embarassed this valentine day
it was the day the boys would pick the
girl he liked best and give his card to the
teacher to deliver at the end of class,
guess he was bashful also
when class was ended, the girl was
anxious to run out of the room,
but she had to wait till the bell rang.
the teacher walked up and down each of the aisles,
dropping the cards whose names were on them,
onto the desks.
when she got near to the shy girl's desk, the girl put
her head down, pretending to gather up her books
when suddenly the teacher dropped a card on her
desk - her face reddened, she didn't know what to do,
picked it up nervously, didn't know who it was from,
didn't matter who it was from
she finally felt she was a part of that class.
shy girlz are best
In fourth grade, I turned in a card with a girl's name on the envelope, but signed it "from an unknown admirer." She never found out who sent it, but the card was a hot topic for days afterward.
Forgot about it, but this brought it all back home. Thanks.
glad you like shy girlz Gary. That means you like me???NO?
maybe your card got to me James. I will never know!
thanks to you both for reading it.
Strong feelings to this poem, this shy girl, and the pressure of this card exchange. What if nobody gave you a card?? How terrible that would be. Lovely work, E.
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yes, it would be awful to be left out on that day.
glad you liked it Susan
acceptance is better than love sometimes
absolutely agree with that Joe.
thanks for reading it.
I got all braced for an unhappy ending and then was saved. Thank you.
Enjoyed the piece, Estelle. The ending is the right fit.
Larry and Sam, glad the ending was a nice surprise.
thank you both.
Very well done, a fave.
so nice of you to read it and fav.
thank you James.
Heartbreakingly good and real.
glad you found it real Daryl.
thanks for reading it.
Yes, siree, Estelle. Sometimes it doesn't matter who the card is from!
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thanks so much Jack, you always give me a laugh. I never did find out who the mystery guy was.
Like this.
glad you liked this Matthew.