by Estelle Bruno
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I like the existential quality to the unanswered question here.
Very good poem Ms.E~
"opiate my curiosity" - Great line, Estelle. Especially like the second half of this piece. Nice read.
I like how the narrator bends the lens of the poem back to herself. Made me dizzy, even in such a small space. Lovely.
thanks Susan, Glad you liked that line Sam, and Marcus, hope your dizzyness went away.
Thanks to all of you.
Hi Estelle - I too, like Susan, love this line, "opiate my curiosity".
Enjoyed this piece.
Glad you agree with Susan, and thanks for reading this.
Simply elegant, expressing so much.
So much is said in the simplest form, which is one of the many things I adore about your work. Great one, Estelle!
David, "elegant", I'm blown away. thanks for that.
Robert, I love that you always seem to know what I'm saying, even when I'm not sure. another thanks.
Nicely done.Beautifully made. Everything fits.
Darryl, that is a sweet comment, thanks so much
Concise and well formed yet reads as if said in passing. Nice.
Like this, kind of twists. *
thanks Gloria, it does twist.