Since dawn doesn't understand my words, I will give them to the donkey, finely cut for him, let them ferment some time and add a few sprigs of lucerne. The donkey grazes in the meadow down the road and always welcomes me with a grin that displays his mauve gums and his teeth shaded in musty green. I hand him my fodder of words: here, I say, you'll like them, even though they're more lemons than carrots. He scrutinises my eyes before eating my offering, his mouth chewing sideways, each crumb, each grain, each stem, each thought, looking at me from under his long straight lashes before launching a loud bray which shows to the sky his teeth spotted with greenish words.
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I love the rich visuals, and practically anything about a donkey makes me smile!
Vivid. *
Love this.
"He scrutinises my eyes before eating my offering" Love this turn.
Perfect capture in a few strokes!
"shaded in musty green. I hand him my fodder of words: here, I say, you'll like them..."
You don't see this every day! *
The donkey is a very poetic animal.
Many thanks for your various comments. Much appreciated.
adore that opening sentence, yo--
and what follows
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A big thank you, Gary.
Mythological in idea and language. *
Many thanks, John, for your interesting comment.