Like a small meteorite, a white cloud falls. The journey seems to have been long since it cannot spring up again, its wings being exhausted. Like a scared and shivering bird, it curls into my hand. Its apparent fragility prevents me from tightening my grip. A unique snowball, warm and soft, which doesn't melt... Amazed by this strange aerial visit, I stand still. Up above me, there appears to be a void, an absence, a silence, as after a departure. I ask the cloud why this fall, why this escape from its family in the sky. In its padded and nebulous voice, it says that warm and perfumed waves had sent it a message, compelling it to announce to earth the imminent arrival of spring.
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This is a translation of "Le nuage blanc" (same author). I have recently published a book on French stories:
https://www.amazon.com.au/ARC-EN-CIEL-SE-BALADE-r%C3%A9cits-French-ebook/dp/B096RD7JMC
I hope you are all feeling well. It is spring here in Australia...
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An ethereal heralding I can imagine.
Like a little breath.
Lovely.
Really appealing imagining of a kind of transcendent event.
Very nice. I see a theme here: nature sends us messages for us to heed or ignore. That we cannot see for ourselves without such benevolant communications is a reflection on our myopic nature.
Many thanks everyone for your excellent comments.
"Amazed by this strange aerial visit, I stand still."
Enjoyed the read, Erika. *
I'm glad you enjoyed my tale, Sam. Thanks.
A beautiful piece of writing *
That's nice, Foster, Thanks.
"wings being exhausted"*
Yes, Beate... Many thanks.