by Ed Higgins
When I first arrived
footling-breeched
you two were there
ahead of me.
Although
unable to stand
as yet, toes wriggling
like hungry sea polyps.
Later, we wobbled
thru time's hourglass
wearing shoes,
laughter and lies
for their modest protection.
Sometimes barefoot
at the beach,
toes full of good
intentions then. Learning
that peculiar landscape
called hope. Nails growing
without notice, intentional malice
occasionally trimmed back.
Still later feet-tripping over
things in those dark
opening and closing
wings inside us:
hubris, love, close friends,
parenthood, hair loss,
searches for meaning to
non-meaning, skepticism.
Grace too as in stars
brightening our midnight
into something like prayer.
Eventually aging generously--
nonetheless nervous at airport
escalators, walking strip malls'
cloned abundance, cholesterol
and other waxy substances.
Finally, my two feet tripping
into an open grave. Toes
now straight up while
going two feet under.
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Something of a riff on René Magritte’s "Le Modele Rouge." The poem's recently published at the surrealism journal Uut Poetry.
From "toes wriggling" to "feet tripping" ...
It has a sad and beautiful note about it.
Sweet, Ed! I'll never look at my feet in quite the same way.
Enjoyed.
Excellent. *
Sea polyps! Yes. Enjoyed this, Ed. **
"toes wriggling
like hungry sea polyps."
Vivid. **
Startlingly good--I gasped at "that peculiar landscape called hope"...began to weep at "hair loss"...
"wings inside us"
Nice poem, Ed.
Unfolds like a painting.
Thanx, all (sorry so late to say so) much appreciated comments. Too busy winding up the semester & giving finals!