by Ed Higgins
bassackward
in the
bathroom mirror
again
the cross-eyed cat
eyeing dual sparrows
ponders
which way to jump.
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In the online surrealism magazine, Uut Poetry, Brooks Lampe, Editor, Aug. 31, 2016.
Why have my eyes suddenly crossed?? *
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"dual sparrows" is great!
Some proofing goofs corrected--as well as a suggestion I drop the "surreal' to make the notion implicit rather than implicit.