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almost a still life


by Dorothee Lang



     on the opposite side
of a red brick wall
     another row of houses 

 

     windows
   ndos        / / facing / 
ind  o / acing                 windows

the sky 

       a small stripe
       on the sidewalk


the fading light 

      a memory
      waiting for its owner








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(original post, Sunday 11 a.m.)


 

almost a still life .1

on the opposite side
of a red brick wall
another row of houses

windows
facing windows
at the edge of a steel frame
the sky
a small stripe

on the sidewalk
the fading light of a memory
waiting for its owner


 

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(or like this?)

almost a still life .2

on the opposite side
of a red brick wall
another row of houses -
windows
facing windows

the sky
a small stripe 

on the sidewalk

the fading light of a memory
waiting for its owner

 

 





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(follow-up version, after first feedback)


(still walking the lines..)

almost a still life .3

on the opposite side
of a red brick wall
another row of houses -
windows
facing windows

the sky
a small stripe
on the sidewalk

the fading light
of a memory
waiting for its owner


 

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(follow-up version, after second feedback)


almost a still life .4

on the opposite side
of a red brick wall
 another row of houses 


windows
windows   / / facing / 
windows / facing /         windows


the sky

       a small stripe
       on the sidewalk


the fading light 

      a memory
      waiting for its owner


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