TBT

Such a fine single sentence story.

Now I can't get the song out of my head - but then, it's a good song with a great voice. Good piece, David. Strong imagery in a small space.

So little says so much; time, change, freedom to do whatever we liked. Nice.

Darn it, David, you made me Google "centipede grass". Next time I use it in a scene I'll think of you. *

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I read it four times feeling like a dolt. TBT? A kind of TB? A kind of TNT? A misplaced Fb reference in a migrant story? I read and read and read and read. It turns like dancers in a small kitchen. *

I like this David, sad and haunting the way it evokes the passage of time and the loss since.

Nifty little tidbit. Says a lot in a small space. *

This has got it, David. In spades.

back then . . . *

Yes *