by David James
She tells me I have to face the fact that I have the heart of the Tin Man. I know the story. He had none. She is very sensitive and I have to measure my remarks because words bruise her so easily. So, I smile and say nothing. I have to be very delicate since she caught me in a lie about the hotel thing. She phoned my room to suggest I look out to see the remarkable sunrise and my other woman reflexively answered it. I told her it was the maid, but she recognized her sister, Ellen's voice.
About a month ago when Ellen came by to return one of our snowboards I slipped up and affectionately touched her cheek. I think she picked up on that as a sign and probably caught Ellen's gaze then, too. I know she wants a divorce and would love to get her pound of flesh by fleecing me, knowing how much I love my money. Listening to the muffled sounds of her crying all the time in the bathroom has me feeling small as I wait for, as they say, for the other shoe to drop. I don't even have to crane my neck to lean out. The sky is milky.
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Nice piece, David.
"I know the story. He had none."
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"The sky is milky."
Enjoyed the read. I like. *
Enjoyed, David. Tight. Full of complication. --Fave
Oh, yikes. So well written. "The sky is milky." *
I like the way the story unfolds with strong voice, well chosen details, and layers of implications.*
Thanks for reading my story.
Great image at the finish. Like the way the words deftly sketch the larger picture.*
This story is well done; edgy and well paced.