by Darryl Price
Notice how she pulls herself along without seeming to imagine any of it's her own doing?
The sunken stone-squashed sky lets go of itself ever so softly,
The long brown ribbons of water spinning in twists
From behind her like elongated fluted out swimmers. She won't look up for
Looking down again. Does she not float? Ah yes, yes she does, and so gracefully.
For all the world I say she is pulling everything around her
Into her sad, forsaken eyes, her bent but not yet breaking open top to bottom hanging neck, her wounded sullen
Forehead, silent as a hurricane in a canning jar. If there
Are stars they remain stuck below in piles of thick groping grasses.
She wants to be dragging this tiny,
Dead dream behind her like a peeling and plastic fish toy. If you should spot her feet then you too
Would see that they are only little red
Leaves stuck to her legs. Instead our poet will be having none
Of this sorry nonsense; soon as he can he dreams up something stirring in the wake all anew,
See how gently now he blows open
Her feathered, gaping wounds? There,there that's so much better, he barely
Sings her real given name out loud, then kisses out a gliding twin bubble in which to
Ripple along with her;she traces but cannot actually
Outrun her own reflection. She's waiting around
Now as new light spreads itself all around her daily sorrows
Like a freshly applied Picasso. And up, up she'll
Take to the hour's edges at last. The dutiful wind breaks down the torn background,
Furiously filling in what's left
With tree, with cloud, offering nothing but sweetest grapes.
05-11-05—01-28-11
darryl, surely you're joking - you didn't read this yourself, the goddess did:
"a goddess/hell-bent on catching a//goon to mortal with; and/as you lie from behind/yourself she will lie with/you..."
this is so crazily clever, wakes my brain up at this godless hour. a poem on love's hand without ever describing that hand. your heart is a thundering, fire-spitting dragon, my friend.
Well done--I love the asking tone of this, inviting the reader to deny it. Nice.
"Must you actually lust for a child's miracle life?"
A question worthy of some meditation. Lovely writing. *
Nice work, DP. Enjoyed the phrasings here.
Yes, love the writing:
“a goddess
hell-bent on catching a
goon to mortal with; and
as you lie from behind
yourself she will lie with
you.”
Evocative piece!
excellent tone and imagery here. *