by Darryl Price
to us! Without it we are less than human and cannot guarantee your safe passage through our woods
any more. Give us back the moon. It is the primary element in the
makeup of our deepest breaths taken to invoke all cycles to continue. It contains the evening's metaphysical argument, like the pumping thumping hopes jumping
in a jugular vein. It transcends with a certain amount of feverish glow the
spanning days we put into our tangled up lives. Give the moon back to us,
please. She has been always our favorite dreaming stone. Following her gaze we are completely ready
to be awakened. You can hear us sliding open. We are beginning to use the
better paper of our nature. She's the better paper of our nature. We cannot live without our
moon, our seedling. She is my landlocked camera! Give us back the moon at once! Do you hear?
This is something so crazy,so ordinary and indispensable between all of us under the sky and in
the one mind's true eye. One could live on this exact sugary plain like a pretty tender
loud whack of a deeply felt wave of green ocean for a long, long time
to come and go. Give back the ever loving moon to us. It's that simple. Nobody gets
hurt then or now forever. We live reading the moon's text, so as to be in some way fortified.
The necessary moon is always at the beginning of any burst of paradise confronting all laughter. I
went outside. She was gone. I wanted to cry. Return her to us immediately I beg of you!
We are deprived of all romantic potential without her. The moon is our faintest, prettiest
smile,
altogether everything, friendlier and warmer than any star slipping off into the farthest distances of rolling
eternal time zones. Losing her would be like losing consciousness. Please bring the moon back.
Give back the moon and everything will be for certain once again. Otherwise the true
meaning of an entire fortress will be laid and broken like blood on your unwashed hands, will be lost forever among your
youngest generations. It is not only war to come, but brutal survival. It is not just religion, but spring time cancelled here on the Martian delta.
Bonus poem:
Another Thing Is (a broken draft)
you're still here and there and only I know
it's infinitely worse for me. I'm not
even sure you'll accept that possible
explanation for these so few stars tonight. Clouds
are still there like lonely wind is still there. Sun
and rain don't pretend to see how you've solved
the human part of the problem, neither
are they invested into that kind of ancient
sea water. Pretty simple. All you
need is love. Love is all you need. So we
actually share something more than our
original end, nothing at all, gas
and oil, five minutes in a lost boat to get to heaven,
potatoes and peas, the shining sad hour.
I met you and you disappeared my heart forever--
like the beautiful panicked pages of
a small kind book of short polite stories.
Couldn't last. Take a deep breath. That's what they
always say. Thing is I never meant to
liken myself to their remorseless fearful surges like that.
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This poem is a box with many sides to it, for the moon itself presents so many different faces back to the ones who are standing there staring. This could be a mother's plea, a lover's plea, or a poet's plea. It could be a father's veiled and anguished threat. It could be the beginning of war, or the end of all things. A meditation. An incantation. A dangerous mixture made in the heavens. You decide.
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Viva luna! *
Hell yes! "You can hear us sliding open."
Vivid work.
Interesting that you made "forever" a separate entity in the last line.
lovely.
Thanks, Beate, Jane and Amanda, much appreciated.
Thank you Marcelle.
You poets...*
Despite my knowledge of the dead rock nature of the actual moon I am nonetheless drawn to her- waxing or waning, slivered or full- as surely as the ocean is.
If only for howling at...... *
Good writing, Daryl.
Favorite moment:
"We are deprived of potential without her. The moon is our faintest, prettiest
smile altogether..."