Make Music, Not Love

We are

no more than heartbeats on repeat.

So make

mine vibrate, pulsate, detonate.

Make it pound

harder than an 808.

Let's get

it going like a footrace.

Make it rattle

like snares and bass.

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My writing does not usually rhyme but I was feeling particularly inspired this night.

Chris Okum, Aug 21, 2014

Awesome.

Amanda Harris, Aug 21, 2014

I'm hearing revved engines in the background.*

Rachna K., Aug 21, 2014

"Make it pound

harder than an 808." And what Amanda said. ***

David Ackley, Aug 21, 2014

Nicely done.

Mathew Paust, Aug 21, 2014

Oooo, yeah! *

Jake Barnes, Aug 21, 2014

Wow. That first sentence is a show stopper! *

I'm in! *

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