by Amanda Proscia
no more than heartbeats on repeat.
mine vibrate, pulsate, detonate.
Make it pound
harder than an 808.
it going like a footrace.
Make it rattle
like snares and bass.
My writing does not usually rhyme but I was feeling particularly inspired this night.
I'm hearing revved engines in the background.*
"Make it pound
harder than an 808." And what Amanda said. ***
Oooo, yeah! *
Wow. That first sentence is a show stopper! *
I'm in! *