by Tina Barry
The man behind the counter leads the city couple around his shop of mid-century furniture. Thin as a pleat, the wife runs a hand over the smooth surface of a teak dining room table; the man in mismatched plaids, marvels at the chairs' clean lines, their nubby turquoise seats.
A kidney-shaped wooden bowl appeals to the couple. Then a wall clock with fluorescent numbers. Then a pair of elk's antlers. Then nothing.
“Thank you,” they say, nearing the door. “Beautiful pieces.”
The man sighs. Too many compliments and too few sales. “Check out the garage,” he offers, before returning his attention to NPR.
At the garage's entrance, knee high in weeds, stands a plaster Jesus in an electric blue robe.
“Did you see?” “Yes, yes!” The couple stares at the statue, mouths agape.
The hands. Poor Jesus's hands. Gone are the reed-like fingers, the pearly palms raised to Heaven. Instead, hovering like U.F.O.s atop Jesus's soiled cuffs: large white ceramic knobs.
“So. Perfect,” says the wife. “Indeed he is,” the husband agrees, and trots back to the shop.
Jesus is for sale. But he's heavy. Weighted in cement. He'll have to be dug up, shipped to Brooklyn. That's fine with the couple. They hadn't planned on spending a $1000 for what is, they laugh, essentially a garden gnome. But what's a $1000 for Jesus? Not much of a sacrifice. Really. No sacrifice at all.
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"Hands Like White Porcelain" is posted at the newly revamped MadHat Lit. Thanks to editor Carol Reid for including me with other Fictionaut Gary Powell, Chris Okum, Bud Smith and others.
Quirky good. The gradual buildup of character and suspense works like the opening of Haydn's 94th Symphony. *
Thanks for comparing "Hands Like White Porcelain" to Haydn's 94th Symphony, Matthew. You sure know how to flatter a girl!
So much for " graven idols." This is great, Tina, scalpel-sharp and funny.
Thanks, David! Glad you found "Hands Like White Porcelain" funny.
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Thanks for the star, Sam! Much appreciated.
This is no sacrifice. Thanks for the mention. Great story.*
Graven images? What graven images? Icons.
Thanks for the kind words about "Hands Like White Porcelain" Gary V. & Gary Hardaway, and thanks for the stars!
This just makes me smile every time I read it. Thanks, Tina!
Thanks, Carol. I'm glad you enjoy the story.
Tina, I loved this when I read it at Mad Hat Lit (a great issue to be sure!) Also enjoyed it the second time around. I always enjoy your quirkier pieces and this one resonates. *
Hi Robert,
Thanks for reading "Hands..." twice. Glad you enjoyed. And thanks for the star!
I love the pacing, especially in the beginning, and the build up to the end. I love how he trots back to the shop. Such quirky, excellent choices in the details... *
I forgot to say... "thin as a pleat" - my favorite phrase in the whole piece...
Thank you, Deborah, for reading "Hands Like White Porcelain," your kinds words and the star! So glad you enjoyed the story.
Great ending! Like a dart thrown right down the middle.
Thanks Darryl!