long string like brown grassy weeds
wave to me as I speeding by
in big buick
on cd I make
john hiatt does not smash
perfectly good guitar
my mouth opens in strong
same support singing
automobile gives much strength to
my being moving silent
in my seat
cell phone and
bottle water (quaking inside)
sit close by
more shaky weeds
laugh only to
themselves but
I see
black ceiling
follows me like shark
then rusty cage kicks in
so will be breaking soon out
of traps in head
so alone in night
mangled in time
so crazy brave
along all
hidden
enemy lines
want truth to fit
like socks
snug and warm
cancel the damsel
in danger
raise the sword
from the rock
flock to the edge
of knowing
the road goes
here in a complete capsule
the ingredients for
life slime to the surface
no one agrees more
than a cell divided
ahab answers his long
question
sees it
sinking with the whale
pulled under
not over
when life began
in earnest
slow pokes
glide by
missing harpoons
strung out in
noisy blood letting
keep your goddamn
hands on the wheel
nobody's perfect
like age comes and goes
seeing sometimes fades
vision tied up in blind knots
singing the song
of the ocean
entangled in the weeds
so deep below
"more shaky weeds
laugh only to
themselves but
I see
black ceiling
follows me like shark"
***
Thanks for reading Rachna K!
want truth to fit
like socks
snug and warm
Yeah! *
Many thanks, Mathew.
Wanting to select a line to quote from your poem, I realized I'd be copying and pasting the whole thing.
"Breaking soon out of traps in head" is probably what I most need to do.
Bravo. Really fine poem, you. *
"want truth to fit" I like.
"Weeds do not know a thing about the rules."
Love that! Put it in the poem!
You break a few rules here. Break more! Break more!
Hey you guys, Gita, Kitty and Bill, I just arrive home from a hard day at the grind and i see these wonderful notes. Make my day!!