The Savage (K2)
Rises monstrous out of the Baltoro Glacier
Playing poker with oxygen levels
Plays leap frog with embolisms.
Malice and vanity join forces so
murder guns the air even before
the Death Zone. Down suits, bold and cocky
registers the climber's ambitions.
The Serac , a crisp, white wall of kill,
threatens to round and pound for
days before it does so,
a devious cancer waiting for its moment.
Art's rescue was in full flow when
the avalanche took him and he faded into
powder.
All the boys gone, doing what they loved
Big Ger and Rolf, who left his Cecilie
on the ropes. Wilco's lust for his summit
saw the Koreans tangled and questions asked.
No answers, though, and ninety different stories
Crowded into a bottleneck of truth and
lies as the moans of Winter's
ghosts howled louder.
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Author's Note
I have a fascination with huge peaks and the men and women who climb them, even with death an absolute on most expeditions. This is about the doomed 2008 mixed Expedition which saw 11 climbers die over 24 hours. The mountain's largest, single kill in history.
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The last 4 lines are stunning. I like the imagery throughout, but those last 4 lines. *
Agree with Emily about the closing. Strong way to end. Good poem.
Agree with Emily and Sam, which might seem slack of me but, truly, those 4 lines *are* marvelous. *
I agree about the last 4 lines, those are the poem for me.
No answers, and ninety different stories
Crowded into a bottleneck of truth and
lies as the moans of Winter's
ghosts howled louder.
Wish I had written those lines.
Not to belabor the point, but the buildup to the last sentence makes it outstanding.*
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