Chicken Noodle
by Steven Gowin
Damn this airplane
Something in here
Smells like soup
Or some damned
Body smells like soup
Campbell's chicken noodle
Campbell's damned
chicken noodle soup
Smells unclean
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Wow. Yes. Yes, it does.
It's not what you write about; it's how you write about it.
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Strong piece. Good balance- lines and stanzas.
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I could smell it along with the turbulence!
Not mama's. *
Too much time on planes! *
Thanks all. I think it was somebody coming back from Burning Man - a combination of mildew and dust and light BO.
Haha & Yikes! *