Columbus Avenue, I'm the tense union of poor city rich city,
gentrification. I'm slithering wealthy
slumming, pissed off. Working class starving,
eyeing leather toe sandals at the Craft Sale.
Pricey ass crafts—pricey ass New York.
I'm not tourists, not one night onlys with Nikons or Minoltas,
I am all these residents, these—
denizens. We walk in each other's footsteps,
over the pilgrim roads of sidewalks;
over the merchant roads of sidewalks.
I—Stock Broker, Deli Meat slicer, student, bike messenger,
I—sweaty itchy palmed pick pocket hovering, waiting
for pedestrian closeness to create magic.
Multitude of summer dresses, long & short,
wind dresses, I'm the lover waved to, lover sought.
I'm the Brave women of the City in thongs or commando; I,
walking a dog; I, in a sea of Ray Bans.
I'm a door man rocking side to side in the shade, praying not to be laid off,
watching Jersey plates going around in circles & no curbside
parking. I'm the cop patronizing black kids by the Museum of Natural History.
I'm New York City summer, random acts of random, bus exhaust
rough riding on coffee beans & pretzel scents,
pizza slices, falafel, cherry flavored ices, peanuts.
I'm all of it in the haze-hanging like a favorite song in radio static,
I'm sticky & wow—like June's first sweat.
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The fifth stanza wouldn't format right so the end of the last line became a new line I couldn't tab over. Oh, and summer's here, Woo-Hoo!
Roberto, this is so good. Love the form and voice and the abundance of images. Strong. fave
You give us so much here, Roberto, and you tie it all together into a nice, tight package. Sillful writing. *
great piece Roberto, so much of city life to think about.
You ARE NYC. FAVE.
Roberto "Walt Whitman" Garcia!
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Thanks everyone. Now I just have to get it published (and keep revising it too).
Great poem. Your images are working beautifully together. We feel ourselves inside this scene. *
Utterly great poem. Thinking Sandburg in shades ... but tha's another town altogether, time too.
Dude ... made me sweat!
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Roberto
I definitely heard Whitman, but how you make me feel the tensions in the city - and smell the exhaust.
Loved it. fave
Damn this is good! You got it all here, you got NYC in fist-fulls, sensory images that slam-bam the reader. Terrific ending too!
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Great sense of form and language. You bring the city to life here.
Roberto, this made me miss the Big Apple, my home, in my favorite season there: summer. A delicious poem, filled with great sensory details. Fave.