by Peter Erich
Mint grass in
a backyard flood light
silhouettes on
glittering humidity
watermelon wedges
in our faces
this is when
the stars lay
on wet rinds
as we slurp crushed velvet
our tongues sifting
for black diamonds.
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i just want everyone to say yes to the memory that is so good that it scares them. i just want everyone to say yes to a future so successful it scares them.
if you can define the boundaries that you place on yourself - then you can break them. and if you can break them you can be whatever the fuck you want to be.
even if that means you and your closest friends, eating watermelon in a backyard without a fence.
Our tongues sift
for black diamonds.
Such a visual treat. *
@Rachna Thank you!
That last stasnza is worthy of even the very best Black Velvet School poet in Georgia. Bravo.
Last five lines are super. *
@James I am not sure what that is but it sounds like a good thing. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
@jake Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it.