Betty, batty from hormones, in a fanciful fit,
named her daughter Lavender. Husband Don winced.
Brothers Donald, John, Billy, and Tom
were puzzled and pleased by this sister, this girl,
who was a little bit like them, yet not like them at all.
Each night and most afternoons Betty told Lavender
stories, sang her songs, opened books full of pictures
where stout hearts bamboozled evildoers that lurked,
and rags became ball gowns glowing with pink.
Poor maids, Auroras, Swan Queens and their ilk
with true lovers, often princes, used cunning and tricks
to free castles from brambles, lift spells, smote the slick.
As happens, Lavender grew grown, moved on and away
from her mother's fine songs to live songs of her own.
She searched for a prince, found several at least,
vanquished evils and weasels, fiercely scolded some trolls,
got caught in the muck, found her footing, soldiered through.
No castles came calling; never mind she made homes.
With mostly good luck, Lavender aged right up to old.
Though her body got cranky, she kept close to her heart
certain fluttery trills and persistent wisps
of fast stallions,
wise wizards,
dances, feasts,
and folks loving loud--
as dead dragons smoldered in heaps on their hills.
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This is in my book, One Day Tells its Tale to Another. Gabriel Orgrease reads, practices, reads it in a video on my website, www.nonnieaugustine.com
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A use of enchantment.
I love the spirit of this, and especially the last section. So glad those wisps were persistent!
Way to go, Lavender! Love this--the cadence, the wit, a good writer having fun. A+ / *
Fun stuff!*
Nice. I love the last line (though I'm usually partial to dragons). *
Got a kick out of this.*
A musical gallop. I burst into laughter at "smote the slick", and my smile stayed stuck on me the rest of the way. In fact, I'm still smiling. *
This is really enjoyable. Completely unpretentious without verging on cliché, and very nicely musicked. Good use of hypermeter, which manages to speed up instead of ruinously bog down the flow of the poem.