A Wee Noggin -
Paddy Whacker's Challenge
by Michael J. Solender
Padraig Rory Conner Murphy O'Shea was a machinist from Dublin who enjoyed a pint or two with his mates after grinding metal plates and tooling whatcha-hickeys and jiggly-gigs all the day long.
Paddy was a huge bear of a man, with giant forearms and out sized hands that could crush whole walnuts into a fine powder though he had one particularly strange physical unusual-ity that puzzled all who knew him; Padraig Rory Conner Murphy O'Shea had the most tiny head one could imagine.
His head was a might puny, superciliously tiny and just outright dinky. It seemed to balance as a pea on his broader than broad shoulders. On the eve of celebrating their patron saint at the public house, one of his particularly cabbaged mates was bold enough to ask him about his cranial deformity.
Now Padraig Rory Conner Murphy O'Shea was a bit rat-arsed this evening himself and was amenable to sharing the tale that to this day he had never told before.
“I was a lad of 18 and down at the sea wall one fine morning after a huge storm the night before,” he started the yarn, “ I saw before me in the water a struggling maiden who seemed to be caught up in the fishing nets, I dove in and with me knife in me teeth I wrestled and cut her free and brought her to the dock.”
He continued, “She was the loveliest creature I'd ever seen with golden locks and a fine form, but she was a mermaid and built like a fish from below the waist; she told me I could have one wish for saving her life and as she didn't posses the proper equipment, I was prepared for the next best thing and I asked her for a little head instead.”
Ha ha ha ha! This is great! It’s got the flavor of a great pub tale.
Every word, true too.
I saw a story months ago, by a guy from London called Rat- arsed on Threadneedle. I tried to write a story called Rat-arsed in Hoboken. I couldn't get it done. You, it appears, could. This is only the third time I've seen the expression. Enjoyed.
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA! laughed me own rat arse off. Loved "one of his particularly cabbaged mates." And "unusual-ity." And the pairing, "mighty puny." O hell, I loved it all.
Just the smile (actually chuckle) I needed!
Larry, Gita, Foster - I tip my hat to ya. What is it about the blarney that makes us laugh so much??
what a great tale - made me smile all over from my large head down to my scales. well told - star!
..... and here's me thinking that he didn't want to appear big headed for saving his damsel in distress!!! wonderful tale.. I'll drink the Bushmills to ya... Cheers!! ;0)
Michael!! I'm taking this one out to the pub...I'm sure to get a few free rounds out of it...oh, and I'll also be sure to provide those bequeathing with a link to Fictionaut
How a little head can get so out of hand, huh? Witty as all out, this was a grand tale from a grand storyteller.
And the moral of the story? Think twice with the bigger head before hoping to enjoy the other head....
Heather, Doug and Zar..have one at the Public house on me!
Yeah! 'With me knife!'
heh :)
laughed, laughed! Fave!
Jason, J., Meg - Thanx!
Very funny with lovely descriptions. loved cabbaged mates, whatcha-hickeys and jiggly-gigs!
So funny. I love his tiny little head (is it a metaphor?) ha ha
Shelagh, thanx. Susan yes his tiny little head is in fact a metaphor...hahahha
HAHAHAHA This is like the greatest story ever. We must go have a beer one day and you must share this with a straight face so we can howl. Well done, you.
You should get a royalty check for this baby.
Perfect. Thanks for the laugh. Would love to hear this read aloud.
Elizabeth - I don't have the brogue for it but if I can get Sean Connery, it would be perfect!
Hee Hee Hee, ya devil!
Great read and a job well done!
whatcha-hickeys and jiggly-gigs all the day long
Had no idea where that was heading. harharhar... unusuality indeed.
Oh that one put a dimple in my cheeks! The top ones ;)
what a laugh... great read!
Quite funny, and the brogue is present in your choice of words. I know several Irish codgers who tells stories in this way; when they reach the punchline they manage to keep a straight face with just the hint of a smile, and their reward is in how much they crack you up.
Wow, what a practical narrator. Funny. Great short.
You got me with that one, you did.
Brilliant!