I. Storm Warning
Demon drums & The Four Horsemen. Chaotic gusting wind, hewing fiery flames in Elysian Fields & a shaky house of cards. Super typhoon in the Ring of Fire, election mania, & Tea Party madness. Paranoia, conspiracy, apprehension & fear. Insatiable greed & lust. Rape, pillage & plunder Mother Gaia as everybody heads for the hills. See it all come tumbling down under its own weight like a dinosaur dancing in dixie cups.
Into the gathering gloom. Cars pass heading north, headlights on & windshield wipers flapping The low hanging sky an overbearing mass of bruised and sullen clouds. Black widows in wispy white lace dance along the leading edge. The lake lies deep and silent, a solid slab of gun-metal blue sheet steel. No boats out on the water. Squall line moving south, the far shore hardly visible in the mist. Static on the radio & intermittent power. Lights flicker off
and then
back on
again.
This part is over now. You're off the field, out of the game. I can't believe. Who saw that coming? You. Surprised as any of us.
What would you do
today
if you knew
your time was up
tomorrow?
II. After the Tempest
The tempest of storms with its restless thunderheads and bag of hammers and bolts ripped through the landscape. It rumbled away and faded from view like a great, migrating herd. White horses grazed in sodden fields. The air was scoured clean.
We stand under a soaring sky. It sweeps down the long lake all the way to the point where heaven and earth converge and disappear. Birds sing. A bell tolls.
The time is always now
Someday, the Grim Reaper, wrapped in hooded cowl, the thorny stem of a red rose clenched between his teeth, will climb up the garden trellis to my bedroom window
But not today
This cascade of days with no horizon could go on forever.
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Reflections on recent personal experiences and current events. It's a mad, mad, mad, mad world.
I especially find the form effective - its motion in waves. The form fragments, then comes together, breaks again. That works well, Michael.
And these strong lines in section II: "We stand under a soaring sky. It sweeps down the long lake all the way to the point where heaven and earth converge and disappear. Birds sing. A bell tolls."
I like. *
This evokes the feel and look of a storm without the usual metaphors. It has a fresh and grander ominence. The Reaper visual at the end is perfect. *
So many incredible images in here, Michael! " The lake lies deep and silent, a solid slab of gun-metal blue sheet steel." And that ending is killer! LOVE it! ****
Sometimes we talk about things in order to talk about other things in a language of our own. Enjoyed this very much.
Really nice, MGM. Very vivid with a strong personal flair.
It's a mad world, indeed, Michael! This is really great, the details are amazing, and the fresh, original take on modern events, the form is so uniquely you! I enjoyed having a second look at this piece with your re-writes.
Fave.