He remembers his father's concrete slab hands. Balled into fists they resembled kettlebells. The man was born to fight and those doomed to that life doom anyone in their orbit who want anything else. He remembers his mother, remembers her red and blue butterfly chest tattoo as much as her face. The sound of her voice an amalgam of the women he's come to know since. In the gentle grasp of what have been described his whole life as piano fingers, his newborn daughter gawks with eyes he's stared into a million times before and a million more to come.
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Written in Kathy Fish's Fast Flash workshop, Oct. 2019. Couldn't think of a better place for it than here.
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Long live flash!
Drop this capsule into a hundred-gallon aquarium and watch it unfold into a canon of novels rich with life.
Beautiful! Thank you Mathew for bringing me here . . . x
I love the "concrete slab hands"...
Thanks Dianne, Mathew, Amantine, and Erika for your kind comments.
World in a nutshell.
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I like this, Matthew. Makes me want more! "concrete slab hands"...go for it!
JLD, Kitty, thank you for reading and commenting.
Phwar. This got me right there in the place it was supposed to. Winded. *