by Marc Lowe
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Wake up! But it was already too late for Charles. He pulled his bloody, severed leg from beneath the covers. Some dream, he said to himself, then promptly died.
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Gina Blue was a misogynist. With a flick of her wrist, she wiped out all of the girls at school. Ironically, the bomb she detonated left only her, the one girl she hated the most, standing.
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While eating an apple, Gregory realized his dog had, in fact, expired two weeks earlier.
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Instant fiction! Previously unpublished.
These are great, surreal micros (my favorite kind). I don't know what the numbers indicate, at all, but it doesn't matter. First is my favorite. Great work, Marc. *
Wow, that was fast! I was just reading another of yours, actually -- digesting it, as it were -- when your comment appeared. How lovely. Many thanks for the vote of confidence. (Hint: word count.)
Ha, okay, I see it now! Not enough coffee yet...
instant gratification, instant favorite
Barbed wire shorts. I like it. Fav.
These are wickedly good, sharp, twisting and surprising! Just how I love flashes to be. *
instant suprise, hardly an aftertaste at all...(not true, lingers and blows up like a foldable doll)
Ooh, like. I'm sure I've had this feels-a-bit-Kharmsian reaction to your writing before. Clever and funny and sharp. *
neat. like the way you end these.
wowza! love these, especially that middle one. peace *
Oooh nice little stories! Poor Charles. And for some reason I picture Gina Blue in school girl's uniform.
these characters are having a very hard time. someone give them presents!